What makes a good narrative?

We have been learning about writing a narrative. A good narrative includes good sentences really good start and a hooked in title. One of these things that i well is have a good tittle have the capital letters in the right place. One of these things that i need to get better at is foll stops and write spelling words.

Speech

I am not confident with speeches because i get really shy and scared and because everyone looks at me. I want to get better at talking to the audience and using better eye contact and look confident.

Segregation

We learnt the word Segregation. Mr M separated the green and blue eyes and they had some lollies because who ever had brown and black eyes we never got lollies. An example is when America separated the white and black people. Black people could never go on the bus like Rosa Parks was on a bus this white man came on the bus and the bus driver told Rosa Park to get off her seat but she refused to get off the bus. The bus driver called the cops and she got arrested for giving up her seat. 8)

winter sports

At winter sports i learned to play nock out at basketball.
it is fun doing basketball and winter sports.
At winter sports i learned to play rugby.You have to take one of there tails be side them.

im feeling lucky becuase im in Estien i feel good about it becuase we do factions.i now how to do factions better then other maths.i have been learning that some fractions are bigger than a whole like 13/3.

My hardest challeng was caving because I had to go to the toilet I had to wait in till it was finish!!!

MY FIRST BLOG

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